Danny - Not a bad start! I think your next posts would benefit from a different kind of organization: break up the text so that it is easier to scan, include a "bottom line up front" paragraph so that busy people can get the takeaways without reading the entire article, include some visuals--charts would be helpful, and position hyperlinks within the text rather than as separate paragraphs. I also think it would be good for you to make one argument per post that is clear from the first couple of sentences. - MCH
Danny - Not a bad start! I think your next posts would benefit from a different kind of organization: break up the text so that it is easier to scan, include a "bottom line up front" paragraph so that busy people can get the takeaways without reading the entire article, include some visuals--charts would be helpful, and position hyperlinks within the text rather than as separate paragraphs. I also think it would be good for you to make one argument per post that is clear from the first couple of sentences. - MCH